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posted April 8th, 2013, 6:25 pm

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April 7th, 2013, 12:12 pm

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And that was chapter two!

I feel like I didn't plan this chapter very well, so I don't know how good it was. The end was a bit anti-climatic. I'll be sure to do a better job of planning future chapters. :s

Anyway, thanks for reading, and feedback is greatly appreciated if you have any!

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April 8th, 2013, 10:42 pm

Digitus

What a way to end the chapter, can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.

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April 10th, 2013, 12:22 pm

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@Digitus: Hope it won't disappoint! :)

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